Examples: Modifications in "The Bhagavata", a book from Bhaktivinoda Thakura
Document 1: Text from "The Seventh Goswami" (TSG) (a book from Rupavilasa, 1989)
Document 2: Text from "Gaudiya Vaishnavism" Homepage (GVH) (Premananda) (8/1998)Example 1
TSG: He crossed the gate of the Vedanta, as set up by the Mayavada construction of Sankaracarya, and preferred to chalk his way out to the unitarian form of the Christian faith, converted into an Indian appearance.
GVH: He crossed the gate of the Vedanta, as set up by the construction of the designing Sankaracarya, the chosen enemy of the Jains, and chalked his way out to the Unitarian form of the Christian faith, converted into an Indian appearance.
Example 2
TSG: That great work seemed like a repository of ideas, scarcely adapted to the nineteenth century, and we hated to hear any argument in its favor.
GVH: That great work looked like a repository of wicked and stupid ideas, scarcely adapted to the nineteenth century, and we hated to hear any arguments in its favor.
Example 3
TSG: God bless the spirit of our noble guides for our eternal good. These great souls were not mere luminaries like comets appearing in the firmament for a while and disappearing as soon as their mission is done.
GVH: God bless the spirit of our noble guides. These great souls were not like comets appearing in the firmament for a while and disappearing as soon as their mission is over.