Examples: Modifications in "Putana", an essay from Bhaktisiddhanta Sarasvati
Document 1: Text from "Hare Krishna Tradition" (HKT) (5/1997)
Document 2: Text from "Vaishnava News Network" (VNN) (7/1999)Example 1
HKT: King Kamsa, acting on this traditional fear is never slow to take the scientific precaution of deputing empiric teachers of the scriptures, backed by the resources of dictionary and grammar and all empiric subtleties to put down, by the show of specious arguments based on hypothetical principles, the true interpretation of the eternal religion revealed by the scriptures.
VNN: King Kansa acting on this transitional fear is never slow to take the scientific precaution of debuting empiric teachers of the scriptures backed by the resources of Dictionary and Grammar and all empiric subtleties to put down, by the show of spacious arguments based on hypothetical principles, the true interpretation of the eternal religion revealed by the scriptures.
Example 2
HKT: The Putanas have power only over the atheist. It is a thankless but salutary task which they perform for the benefit of their unwilling victims.
VNN: The Putanas have power only over the atheists. It is a thankless but salutary task which they perform for the benefit of their willing victims.
Example 3
HKT: Putana is the slayer of all infants. The baby, when he or she comes out of the mother's womb, falls at once into the hands of the pseudo-teachers of religion. These teachers are successful in forestalling the attempts of the good preceptor whose help is never sought by the atheists of this world at the baptisms of their babies.
VNN: Putana is the layer of all infants. The baby, when he or she comes out of the mother's womb, falls at once into the clutches of the pseudo-teachers of religion. These teacher are successful in forestalling the attempts of the good preceptor whose help is never sought by the atheists of this world at the baptisms of their children.
(The slayer - layer above seems to be a typo. However, it really makes things different.)