Examples: Modifications in "To love god", an essay from Bhaktivinoda Thakura
Document 1: Text from "Hare Krishna Tradition" (HKT) (6/1997)
Document 2: Text from "Sri Guru Vandana Website" (SGV) (Caitanya Saraswati Math, 9/1998)
Document 3: Text from "Rays of The Harmonist" (ROT) (6/1998)Example 1
HKT: This is one of the four principle of worship or what they call in Vaishnava Literature, Shanta Rasa.
SGV: This is one of the four principles of worship or what is known in Vaishnava literature as Shanta Rasa.
ROT: This is one of the four principles of worship or what they call in Vaisnava literature, santa rasa.
Example 2
HKT: Then the Saviour. tells him these words, "You must love God with all thy strength or will, - you are wrong in concluding thhat you will loose your active existence - you will get it the more, work for an work to God, proceeding from no interested views but from a holy free will ( which is alone the strength of man ) and identifying itself with pure love, will fully engross your attention."
SGV: Then the Saviour tells us these words, "You must love God with all thy strength or will - you are wrong to conclude that you will loose your active existence - you will get it the more. Work for God and to God, proceeding from no self interested views but from a holy free will (which is alone the strength of man) and identifying itself with pure love, will fully engross your attention."
ROT: Then the Saviour tells him these words, "You must love God with all thy strength or willyou are wrong in concluding that you will loose your active existenceyou will get it the more. Work for God and work to God, proceeding from no interested views but from a holy free will (which is alone the strength of man) and identifying with pure love, it will fully engross your attention."
Example 3
HKT: Reveal Thy most valuable truths to Your own may not be numbered with the fanatics and the crazed and that the whole mankind may be admitted as "Your own."
SGV: Reveal Thy most valuable truths to all so that Your own may not be numbered with the fanatics and the crazed and that the whole of mankind may be admitted as "Your own."
ROT: Reveal Thy most valuable truths to all so that "Your own" may not be numbered with the fanatics and the crazed and that the whole of mankind may be admitted as "Your own.